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2006 World Citizen Essay Contest

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This year the World Affairs Council hosts the 8th annual World Citizen Essay Contest for Washington State students in second through twelfth grades. The goal of the World Citizen Essay Contest is to promote discussion among students, teachers, families, and community members about the ways that individuals can effect positive change in the global community.

The 2006 World Citizen Essay Contest will focus on the following question:

Imagine that you are a diplomat whose mission it is to represent a country to the world community. You and your fellow diplomats are working towards a better world for your citizens and others.

Which country would you represent and what issue would you want to address? Why is this important and what are some possible solutions?

 

Contest Rules

ESSAY LENGTH: 1,000 words or less, typed and double-spaced.

DEADLINE: March 20, 2006 (postmarked). All essays must be submitted in four (4) copies with an Essay Cover Form (download as PDF or Word).

ELIGIBILITY: Washington residents in 2nd through 12th grades.

AWARDS: Awards will be granted in each of the categories grades 2-5, 6-8, and 9-12.

First prize: $200 and recognition at a World Affairs Council event
Second prize: $100
Third prize: $50

JUDGING: A panel of judges will select winning essays. They will use the criteria to evaluate essays according to three categories of equal weight: content, analysis, and style. Please see the judging criteria for detailed information.

NOTE: English language learners are encouraged to participate.



Judging Criteria

Content

Thorough research of your topic is necessary to allow you to provide strong factual evidence to support your argument.

  • Provide clear, real-world examples for every point you make.
  • Provide rich details to illuminate every example.
  • Ensure that all your evidence is accurate and relevant.

Analysis

Your essay must provide your clear and original vision, and it must use this vision to help make sense of the examples you use.

  • Provide a concise and arguable thesis that addresses the topic.
  • Explain how each of your examples helps support your thesis.
  • Consider your topic from a variety of perspectives.

Style

The clarity and power of your language is essential to making your essay convincing.

  • Organize your essay with an introduction, a conclusion, and well-structured body paragraphs.
  • Use powerful language that expresses your ideas coherently, precisely, and persuasively.
  • Ensure that your essay is free of errors in spelling, punctuation, syntax, and grammar.


Checklist

Download Cover Form and checklist (as a PDF or Word document)

Is your essay no longer than 1,000 words?

Is your essay written in English?

Does your essay address all the parts of the essay topic?

Have you given your essay a title?

Have you followed accepted standards regarding attribution of quotations, arguments, and ideas of others and have standardized citations and a bibliography?

Is your essay typed and double-spaced on 8 ½ x 11 paper?

Have you numbered the pages of your essay?

Have you made sure that your name and school does not appear anywhere on the essay?

Have you made 4 copies of your essay, including the bibliography?

Have you made a copy of the essay and this cover form to keep for your own records?

 


Downloads

Download the Cover Form and checklist to submit with your essay:

Cover Form and checklist (PDF)
Cover Form and checklist (Word)

Download the Rules and Judging Criteria:

Rules and Judging Criteria (PDF)
Rules and Judging Criteria (Word)




Researching Tips

THE FIRST STEP:

The first step to writing an essay as if you were a diplomat is to understand what exactly a diplomat does.

The U.S. State Department has a web site that can give you some sense of what the diplomacy is and why it is important. See http://future.state.gov/why/index.htm

Wikipedia gives an overview of diplomatic mission. See http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Diplomacy

You can also take a look at the countries’ background information provided by the U.S. State Department, see http://future.state.gov/where/maps or countries’ profiles at the CIA Factbook, see http://www.cia.gov/cia/publications/factbook/

THE NEXT STEP:

The next step of your research will be to find an international issue that you think is important today. Try and gather examples that illustrate the impact this issue is having on people's lives either in the country of your choice and/or in the international community.

eDiplomat: Global News Sources provides a list of leading magazines, news agencies, newspapers, news channels and government press releases from around the world that covers wide range of international topics. See http://www.ediplomat.com/dc/news_sources/news_sources.htm

The U.S. State Department maintains a list of international topics and issues that might be used as a start point for your research. See
http://www.state.gov/interntl/


TeachGlobalEd.net provides online resources for global educators. However, this is also a great way to connect to web sites about global issues. All of the sites listed here have been reviewed by educators who have written a description about each link. If you are someone who likes to do their research online, this can save you a lot of time searching through web sites that do not offer credible sources of information and will not be useful to you in writing an essay. See http://www.coe.ohio-state.edu/globaled/display.cfm?parent=97&isGlobal=true

THE LAST STEP:

The last part of the essay question asks you to suggest some possible solutions with regard to the issue you selected. While you should form your own opinion and be creative in framing a solution, it can also be useful to find out what kinds of strategies other people have suggested.


To find your local public library on the Web see:
http://www.publiclibraries.com/washington.htm


Writing Tips

Global Classroom recommends the writing resources of educator Steve Peha and his organization Teaching That Makes Sense. Mr. Peha has designed several lesson plans and authored hundreds of articles on the subject of writing. Below are excerpts and links to some of his relevant resources.

A Concise Guide to Formal Writing

Forms:
- Research Reports
- Business Letters and Other Formal Correspondence
- Job Applications
- Writing for Newspapers or Other Publications
- Submission to a School Anthology
- Essays for Contests
- Published Interviews
And so on…

Style:
Formal; like talking to an audience of people you do not know; like you were giving a speech. Here, the conventions of presentation are just as important as any other trait of the writing. This type of writing requires the full Writing Process. The writing style must suit the demands of the medium and the expectations of the intended audience.

Audience:
The writer, classmates, teacher, parents, or a group of people unknown as individuals to the author (political leaders, students at their schools, scientists, historians, etc.). The writer must have an audience in mind even if he or she does not know anyone personally in that audience. The question to ask yourself and your students is this: How can I write to affect my audience? How can I best use my ideas and my presentation to get my point across to my readers?

Function:
Learning the value of producing formal written communication to achieve a specific goal; learning to write for a specific group of readers; learning to produce final, published writing that meets the expectations of a target audience. This type of writing should have a definite purpose, and the author should be able to articulate that purpose early on in the Writing Process.



What is good writing?

Mr. Peha has a list of six basic things to pay attention to when you are writing. It may be useful to keep these things in mind as you revise your essays.

1. Ideas that are interesting and important.
Ideas are the heart of the piece — what the writer is writing about and the information he or she chooses to write about it.

2. Organization that is logical and effective.
Organization refers to the order of ideas and the way the writer moves from one idea to the next.

3. Voice that is individual and appropriate.
Voice is how the writing feels to someone when they read it. Is it formal or casual? Is it friendly and inviting or reserved and standoffish? Voice is the expression of the writer's personality through words.

4. Word Choice that is specific and memorable.
Good writing uses just the right words to say just the right things.

5. Sentence Fluency that is smooth and expressive.
Fluent sentences are easy to understand and fun to read with expression.

6. Conventions that are correct and communicative.
Conventions are the ways we all agree to use punctuation, spelling, grammar, and other things that make writing consistent and easy to read.

Do you want a "What is Good Writing?” organizing checklist? You can find one for beginning writers and one for maturing writers on pages 5 and 6 of Mr. Peha’s downloadable Organizers packet (PDF).

 
What Did You Think? Why Did You Think It?

If you want to sharpen your expository writing skills you must try to tell your readers not only what you think but why you think it as well. The secret to good expository writing (and, ultimately, to just about every other kind of writing, too) is always being able to answer two simple questions over and over and over again: [1] What do you think?; and [2] Why do you think it?

To learn more about how you can do this in your writing download Mr. Peha's Writing Across the Curriculum packet (PDF) and check out pages 15-17.

 

Writing Samples

One final tip is to read some of the winning essays from previous years. These essays are examples of powerful writing by students who are passionate about their topics and employ all of the good writing skills mentioned above. However, it is not a good idea to spend too much time comparing your writing to these students. We each have our own voice and that is a good thing. Anyone can be a powerful writer if they work at it!

Good luck! And enjoy the process!

 

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